11/05/2020

Posted by Brad Robert in English 2: 6 on Thursday, November 5, 2020 at 1:17 pm

Warmup: In the comments, rewrite this sentence to make it more descriptive and interesting. “I saw a dog.”

Comments (2)

Hayley Walker

i saw a dog running after a squirrel as I went outside to rake the leaves in my backyard, as I approached the dog I heard a yell calling out for a dog, I then grabbed got the dogs attention with a treat and returned it to its owner

Luis Ravelo

I saw a dog running at me when I went out to take the trash out, I immediately run towards the door as the dog chases me across my backyard.